I finally rewrote the end of the scene and a few more things. The scene is now about 4200 words long and should have reached its final form, even if I'm rewriting or adding a few words as I'm posing it.

I also recut the scene. The 80 shots I initially planned have pumped up to 135. But I'm not happy with that number. It sounds like a lot for a rather static scene. Maybe I'll remove some shots at the end of the scene.

I've posed 35 shots so far but I haven't rendered anything. Temperatures should go down a bit this weekend, maybe I'll be able to render a few.

The reworked scene will have a very different feeling and I'm quite happy with it.

The quick sum up :

• Day 6 Part 4 will contain 2 new scenes: scenes 26 and 27
• Day 6 Part 4 will contain 2 reworked scenes from Day 2: Scenes 1 and 10
• Day 2, scene 1 has been rewritten.
• 4200 words so far.
• 135 shots are planned, 35 are posed.
• I'm posing Day 2 scene 1.

Thank you for your support!

The Naughty Captain