What a great game - I enjoy it very much! A small hint: in the drinking-scene, the whine fluid seems not to be affected by gravity - it "sticks" to the glass.
Just played through the contents up to the end of 0.4.1 last night and I enjoyed it. Best of luck on finishing the rest of the game, and good job with what you have so far.
I feel i need to give you feedback on the V.N. its not bad feedback its just that i noticed the cafe scene done not seem to flow right, first off there are in the cafe talking about iced coffee the brown headed girl is on about iced coffee, then she orders 3 coffee's but the BLONDIE don't like iced coffee and then they enter the cafe is the way i read it and this makes it seem DISJOINTED !!! it would have made more scene if the was outside and then order 2 iced coffee's and what ever the other girl was having a cup of hot coffee or a hot or iced tea . it was nothing major issues its just broke the flow of the novel and was sat here trying to work out what you meant.
no problem its a please to read great V.N's in this time of LOCK DOWN around the world and is a great escape from pressures in live to sit down read and relax
I love: 1. Your focus on the small cast of characters, so we get to know them really well 2. The high number and impact of player choices 3. That there are two relationship routes for each character that even blend over 4. The strong emotional and complex relationships between all characters (also between the girls) 5. The overall high quality (writing, visual, spelling...)
If the remaining days turn out as great as the first 4 ones, the final game will be better than Acting Lessons, Being a DIK, Depraved Awakening, Dracu-Riot! ... and every other visual novel that I've ever played.
There are 2 things I would like to see in the future: 1. More Humor: It's hard to come up with good jokes, when you don't have a natural talent for it, but I would love to see some funny scenes with the girls. 2. More details about the characters: I would like to get to know them better. What do they love and hate? What kind of music to they like? What do the girls like except hanging out at the pool, running, taking a shower, watching movies and going to the mall? Of course not as bland exposition, but weaved into scenes or maybe into the environment? All the environments are pretty clean and impersonal right now. There could be posters, pictures, books/CDs lying around... that give cues about their preferences and background.
Do you have previous experiences as a writer? You definitely know how to craft dramatic scenes and fraught relationships.
I'm glad you liked Summer Scent and I can assure you that I intend to keep and even up if possible the quality of the content and of the overall game in the future versions.
I have some already planned scenes with that kind of content for V0.5. However, they won't be available on all paths. The player will have to play more than just one path to truly understand the characters.
I have been crafting stories as an amateur for a long time now but Summer Scent is the first work I publish. It's also the first time I write in English.
As far as I know I can't simply publish patches, the engine doesn't really allow it. You will have to redownload the entire game each time. I thought about publish updates in the form of folders that you would add to the base game but it's not really intuitive and suitable for all players.
To be fully fair, like 100% fair, I wasn't expecting a well thought-out story like this. I'm curious to see what happens and I hope you get to finish this. Big ups The Naughty Captain.
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What a great game - I enjoy it very much! A small hint: in the drinking-scene, the whine fluid seems not to be affected by gravity - it "sticks" to the glass.
Thank you.
Yes, I couldn't find a way to have the fluids correctly leveled :/
Just played through the contents up to the end of 0.4.1 last night and I enjoyed it. Best of luck on finishing the rest of the game, and good job with what you have so far.
Thank you !
Is there not a 0.3.5 version for Android?
No. I've started porting for android with V0.4.1.
Sorry!
Thank you I will be patient.
I feel i need to give you feedback on the V.N. its not bad feedback its just that i noticed the cafe scene done not seem to flow right, first off there are in the cafe talking about iced coffee the brown headed girl is on about iced coffee, then she orders 3 coffee's but the BLONDIE don't like iced coffee and then they enter the cafe is the way i read it and this makes it seem DISJOINTED !!! it would have made more scene if the was outside and then order 2 iced coffee's and what ever the other girl was having a cup of hot coffee or a hot or iced tea . it was nothing major issues its just broke the flow of the novel and was sat here trying to work out what you meant.
Thank you for your feedback mr_gatez!
I'll have a closer look at it!
no problem its a please to read great V.N's in this time of LOCK DOWN around the world and is a great escape from pressures in live to sit down read and relax
how to download new update and play please help i cannot download new update it download again and again the same version
Hello.
Which version are you attempting to download ?
The last free version is V0.3.5.
The last paid version id V0.4.1.
0.3.5 the game currently i have only 3 days after that game is finished
V0.3.5 contains only the first three days of the story.
V0.4.1 goes up to the fourth day.
when will V0.4.1 release for free?
When I'll release V0.5 !
Playing it now.trying different plots. Is there a walk through?
You can find a walkthrough here :
https://www.patreon.com/zoeyraven/posts?filters[tag]=Masterlist
Thank you for playing Summer Scent !
Thank you !
This might sound dumb but is the latest version supposed to stop on day 5 am i missing something (PS. Sorry if this sounds dumb lol)
The last version, is v0.4.1 and it stops at the end of Day 4.
I'm working on Day 5 as we speak. It'll be the content of the V0.5 update.
And it deosn't sound dumb at all.
Is there suppose to be audio for this VN?
No, there is no audio for now.
I'm aiming to add music and sound effects but for now, there is no audio.
When will android be free.? ive waited for a long time-
V0.4 will become free when I'll release V0.5. I can't give you a precise date. Sorry.
You are doing great. Really impressive. Thank you very much for this game of pure Art.^^
I'm not sure it's really art, but I'm glad you like it! Thank you!
This is really goooooodddd aahhhhhhhhh.!!!!I want more man or woman. It so cheese that I love it.
Well, I'm glad you like it. ;)
how do i install an update it isnt letting me
Hello.
I don't publish update, you'll have to download the entire game each time.
Sorry for the inconvenience !
Another awsome update keep up the outstanding work!! TY
Thank you! I'm glad you like it!
Hey Captain,
you are building something outstanding here.
I love:
1. Your focus on the small cast of characters, so we get to know them really well
2. The high number and impact of player choices
3. That there are two relationship routes for each character that even blend over
4. The strong emotional and complex relationships between all characters (also between the girls)
5. The overall high quality (writing, visual, spelling...)
If the remaining days turn out as great as the first 4 ones, the final game will be better than Acting Lessons, Being a DIK, Depraved Awakening, Dracu-Riot! ... and every other visual novel that I've ever played.
There are 2 things I would like to see in the future:
1. More Humor: It's hard to come up with good jokes, when you don't have a natural talent for it, but I would love to see some funny scenes with the girls.
2. More details about the characters: I would like to get to know them better. What do they love and hate? What kind of music to they like? What do the girls like except hanging out at the pool, running, taking a shower, watching movies and going to the mall? Of course not as bland exposition, but weaved into scenes or maybe into the environment? All the environments are pretty clean and impersonal right now. There could be posters, pictures, books/CDs lying around... that give cues about their preferences and background.
Do you have previous experiences as a writer? You definitely know how to craft dramatic scenes and fraught relationships.
Keep up the amazing work. :)
Hello JackN,
Thank you for your kind words.
I'm glad you liked Summer Scent and I can assure you that I intend to keep and even up if possible the quality of the content and of the overall game in the future versions.
I have some already planned scenes with that kind of content for V0.5. However, they won't be available on all paths. The player will have to play more than just one path to truly understand the characters.
I have been crafting stories as an amateur for a long time now but Summer Scent is the first work I publish. It's also the first time I write in English.
I'll try to stay worthy of your praise!
Thank you!
So true! There is a scene in the blend-over relationship route that nearly moved me to tears. So well done indeed!
Very well done so far, Good Interesting, emotional story, Deep Char's. Looking foreward to seeing more!!
Thank you for your kind words!
Amazing story, looking forward to more keep up the good work!
Question: For updates do we have to redownload the whole thing or do we get a small file to add to the folder that exsists
Thank you!
As far as I know I can't simply publish patches, the engine doesn't really allow it.
You will have to redownload the entire game each time.
I thought about publish updates in the form of folders that you would add to the base game but it's not really intuitive and suitable for all players.
Makes sense, keep up the good work!
How do you make these type of games?
Renpy + Daz Studio + a lot of work. ;p
mmmmmm i might make a game! what are the main apps you need to use?
As I said : Renpy for the engine and Daz studio for the rendering, if you want to make 3DCG like in Summer Scent. :)
MMMMMMM sorry for al the questions but do you have any apps that are sutible for chromebook?
I don't think so, sorry!
Work with what you have. I'm sure you can make something out of it.
it will not let me go father then day
pro the game is fine im in day 2 now
To be fully fair, like 100% fair, I wasn't expecting a well thought-out story like this. I'm curious to see what happens and I hope you get to finish this. Big ups The Naughty Captain.
Thank you =)
I do my best to write a decent story.
I'm glad you liked it!
Une idée sur la date de sortie de la version gratuite ?
La v0.3.5 deviendra accessible a tous quand sortira la V0.4.
Probablement vers mi avril.
For the first experience you did it really good. Keep doing games, I want see a large project of your hand <3
Thank you ! I'm already working on day 2. I hope you'll enjoy it as much !